Selasa, 20 Maret 2018

Passive Voice

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Nama  : Ellen Putri Sa’diyyah
NPM   : 22215182
Kelas   : 3EB19
Facebook blocks data group tied to 2016 Trump campaign
By ALI DUKAKIS
Mar 18, 2018, 4:23 AM ET
http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/facebook-blocks-data-group-tied-2016-trump-campaign/story?id=53826500 
Cambridge Analytica, the London-based political data analytics firm tied to Donald Trump’s presidential campaign, has been suspended from Facebook, the social media giant announced late Friday.
The company was a key partner for the Trump campaign’s digital operation in 2016.
Questions have been raised about the digital operations surrounding the Trump Campaign and Republican Party efforts during the last campaign cycle.
Under the suspension, Cambridge Analytica is blocked from Facebook and cannot buy ads on the site.

The decision, said Facebook, comes in light of newly resurfaced questions surrounding a possible violation to agreement made between Facebook and Cambridge Analytica involving the access, use, and distribution of hundreds of thousands of Facebook user’s personal data.

Facebook offered an explanation of how they arrived at the decision, and why.
“In 2015, we learned that a psychology professor at the University of Cambridge named Dr. Aleksandr Kogan lied to us and violated our Platform Policies by passing data from an app that was using Facebook Login to SCL/Cambridge Analytica, a firm that does political, government and military work around the globe. He also passed that data to Christopher Wylie of Eunoia Technologies, Inc.,” Vice President & Deputy General Counsel for Facebook Paul Grewal wrote.

Grewal explained that, as any app developer would do, Kogan requested and garnered access to information from individuals after users chose to download his app. The app, “thisisyourdigitallife,” according to Grewal, “... offered a personality prediction, and billed itself on Facebook as ‘a research app used by psychologists.’”

“Approximately 270,000 people downloaded the app,” Grewal stated.
“In so doing, they gave their consent for Kogan to access information such as the city they set on their profile, or content they had liked, as well as more limited information about friends who had their privacy settings set to allow it,” he added.

“Several days ago, we received reports that, contrary to the certifications we were given, not all data was deleted,” said Grewal. Facebook is “moving aggressively” to assess the accuracy of the new claims, he added.
“If true, this is another unacceptable violation of trust and the commitments they made,” Grewal said.
Cambridge Analytica is financed in part by Robert Mercer, the wealthy Republican donor and patron of President Trump's former senior advisor Steve Bannon.

Reached by ABC News, a spokesperson for Cambridge Analytical defended their work, claiming, “It would be entirely incorrect to attempt to claim that SCL Elections illegally acquired Facebook data.

"Indeed SCL Elections worked with Facebook over this period to ensure that they were satisfied that SCL Elections had not knowingly breached any of Facebook’s Terms of Service and also provided a signed statement to confirm that all Facebook data and their derivatives had been deleted. Cambridge Analytica and SCL Elections do not use or hold Facebook data,“ the statement read.

Cambridge Analytica argues they violated no laws in obtaining the data under British policy, under which they considered themselves as qualifying under the provisions.

“Under Section 55 of the Data Protection Act ... a criminal offense has not been committed if a person has acted in the reasonable belief that he had in law the right to obtain data,” the Cambridge Analytica spokesman said. “GSR was a company led by a seemingly reputable academic at an internationally renowned institution who made explicit contractual commitments to us regarding the its legal authority to license data to SCL Elections.”

“It would be entirely incorrect to attempt to claim that SCL Elections illegally acquired Facebook data,” the spokesman added.
The spokesman later said in sum, “Cambridge Analytica and SCL Elections do not use or hold Facebook data.

Sen. Amy Klobuchar, D-Minn., on Saturday night called for Facebook CEO Mark Zuckerberg to testify before the Senate Judiciary Committee over the acquisition of user data, saying, "This is a major breach that must be investigated. It's clear these platforms can't police themselves."

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PASSIVE VOICE
ACTIVE VOICE
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A research app used by psychologists
Psychologists use a research app
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Cambridge Analytica is blocked from Facebook
Facebook block Cambridge Analytica
3.
Donald Trump’s presidential campaign has been suspended from Facebook
Facebook has suspended Donald Trump’s presidential campaign
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Questions have been raised about the digital operations surrounding the Trump Campaign and republica Party efforts during the last campaign cycle
The digital operations surrounding the Trump Campaign and republica Party efforts during the last campaign cycle have raised question
5.
Cambridge Analytica is financed in part by Robert Mercer
Robert Mercer financed in part Cambridge Analytica
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A criminal offense has not been committed if a person has acted in the reasonable belief
If a person has acted in the reasonable belief  has not  committed  a criminal offense

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Her parents are visited by my mother every saturday
My mother visit her parents every saturday
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They are met by him everyday
He meets them everyday
3.
This plant was watered by her yesterday
She watered this plant yesterday
4.
Four cats are fed by me
I feed four cats
5.
The letter was written by me
I wrote the letter
6.
He was being helped by her
She was helping him
7.
A car is being bought by him
He is buying a car
8.
A novel is being read by my sister
My sister is reading a novel now
9.
An extra party was being prepared by him
He was preparing an extra party
10.
A mix tape can be made by suga
Suga can make a mix tape




Rabu, 17 Januari 2018

Cover Letter

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Bekasi, April 28th 2016

To:
Human Resource Departement
PT Johnson & Johnson Indonesia
K-link Tower 12th Floor
JL. Jend. Gatot Subroto, Kav. 59A
Jakarta 12950


Dear Sir/ Madam,
I have read from your advertisement at Sindo.com and found that your company is looking for employees for Accountant Staff. I am a fresh graduated from Gunadarma University, majoring in Accounting.

With this application form, i am ready to give my competence and my time if needed and I am sure that i can give my best for your company. I hope there is a chance that was given to me for an interview or other tests.

I confident that I will be able to contribute effectively to your company. Herewith I enclose my :
1. Copy of Bachelor Degree (S1) Certificate and Academic Transcript
2. Curriculum Vitae
3. Copy of Certificate
4. Copy of ID Card
5. Recent photo with size of 4×6



Regrads,


Ellen Putri Sa’diyyah

Rabu, 03 Januari 2018

LETTER OF INVITATION

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Nama   : Ellen Putri Sa’diyyah
NPM   : 22215182
Kelas   : 3EB19
Invitation Letter



PT. Beyond The Scene
Jl. Perjuangan 08, North Bekasi

Bekasi, December  12th  2017

No       : 88/XII/12/2017
Subject: Meeting Invitation

To : All Employees

We write this letter to request you attend a Meeting. The meeting will be attended by all the PT. Beyond The Scene Employees, the meeting will be held on :
Date    :  December 22th 2017
Place    : Town Hall
Time    : 09.00 am – 12.00 am

We invite all employees to attend a meeting to discuss:
1. Introducing new business managers and operational managers
2. Remaking new regulations on permits and leave
3. To evaluation the performance of the company

We hope all employees to attend this meeting . Thank you for your attention.


Regards,


Ellen Putri
HR Staff

LETTER OF APOLOGY

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Nama   : Ellen Putri Sa’diyyah
NPM   : 22215182
Kelas   : 3EB19
Apology Letter
Evho Shop
Cihideung, Bogor

Bogor, December 15th 2017



Dear Ms Ellen,

We are sorry that your recent shipment of supplies was defective. We understand your disappointment and apologize for any inconvenience


In an effort to improve the overall quality of our products and the way that they are being shipped, we have switched to a new delivery company and new packaging. This effort should prevent damage to our products and will expedite orders.

We will replace your entire order and have it shipped by the end of this week. There is no cost to you since this was an error on our part. and we will give you a complimentary shopping voucher for you.

We look forward to continuing serving your business and hope that you will continue ordering products from us. If there is anything else that we can do to reduce your inconvenience, please feel free to contact us.

Sincerely,


Odette
Owner Of Evho Shop


LETTER OF COMPLAINT

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Nama : Ellen Putri Sa’diyyah
NPM : 22215182
Kelas : 3EB19
Complaint Letter

December 12th, 2017
Ellen Putri Sa’diyyah
Griya Kota Bekasi 2, Bekasi
West Java, INDONESIA 17121
Tel +6282298779909


Evho Shop
Cihideung, Bogor
West Java, INDONESIA 21255


Subject : Complaint about some damages of the goods

Dear Sir or Madam,
Through this letter i inform you that my order had arrived on time. However, after i checked the products you sent , there are some goods damages.

The damages are :
1. Packaging is damaged so that the goods is little bit dirty 
2. 2 unit of rusty clothes hanger
3. 1 unit of broken toothpaste dispenser

For the evidence, i will send you back the damage products to be re-check by your company.

I hope in the future, i would not receive anymore damaged products like this. If this thing happen again, i am sorry that i will not shop at your online shop anymore and i will give a low star rating.

Thank you for your concern. I will wait for your reply.

Sincerely,



Ellen Putri Sa’diyyah
Griya Kota Bekasi 2, Bekasi
West Java, INDONESIA 17121
Tel +626217335455

Senin, 12 Juni 2017

Penulisan 8 : Contoh Kasus Studi Kelayakan Bisnis di Indonesia

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Contoh Kasus Aspek Hukum dalam Studi Kelayakan Bisnis di Indonesia

Pelanggaran kasus hukum maupun etika dalam bisnis juga terjadi di sejumlah perusahaan di dalam negeri. Salah satunya datang PT. Nabisco yang merupakan produsen dari makanan ringan yang sangat laris yang bermerk Oreo. Siapa yang tak suka dengan biskuit lezat ini? Namun siapa sangka ternyata biskuit ini sempat menuai kasus yang serius? Anda mungkin masih mengingat pemberitaan tentang produk makanan ini beberapa waktu lalu.
Menurut pemeriksaan dan penelitian BPOM, Oreo berkode ML yang diproduksi oleh luar negeri mengandung melanin yang sangat berbahaya bagi kesehatan tubuh. Namun untuk Oreo berkode MD yang dihasilkan di dalam negeri, melanin tidak terdeteksi, sehingga produk ini aman untuk dikonsumsi. Akhirnya Oreo yang berbahaya tersebut ditarik peredarannya dari pasar dan tentunya PT. Nabisco mendapatkan sanksi yang tegas.
Etika bisnis yang dilanggar oleh PT. Nabisco adalah etika kejujuran. PT. Nabisco tidak memberikan peringatan terhadap konsumen tentang kandungan melaninnya. Pelajaran yang bisa diambil dari kasus ini adalah kita sebagai pebisnis harus memikirkan keadaan konsumen. Kita harus menyediakan pelayanan terbaik dengan produk yang tidak mengganggu kenyamanan konsumen.

Sumber :
http://mahasiswa.me/2017/03/05/kasus-aspek-hukum-dalam-studi-kelayakan-bisnis-di-indonesia-2/